There is more than accuracy involved in preparing financial information for
release. In many cased the entire package is as important as the numbers it
contains. In school, many of us lost points in math class because we didnt show
our workshow how we had reached our final answer. When it comes to financial
statements, you will have to walk a fine line. You will have to show some work,
but it can be damaging to show too much.
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1.
Preparing the Information
There is more than accuracy involved in
preparing financial information for release. In many cased the entire package
is as important as the numbers it contains.
In school, many of us lost points in math
class because we didnt show our workshow how we had reached our
final answer.
When it comes to financial statements, you will have to walk a fine line. You will have to show some work, but it can be damaging to show too much.
How do you determine how much needs to be
shown?
Well, to whom are you going to show them?
Are the numbers going to be seen by:
1.
Shareholders?
2.
Partners?
3.
Market
analysts?
4.
Auditors?
5.
The
tax collector?
6.
Vendors?
7.
beneficiaries?
8.
Your
trade association (in other words, your competition)?
9.
Media?
10. All of the above?
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2. How Much Do You Tell Them?
Never ask a barber if you need a haircut, a cop if you were speeding, a life
insurance agent if you need more insurance, or teenagers if they enjoy doing their
assigned household chores.
You already know what their answers will
be.
Following that logic, if you ask people who prepared your financial information if it should be released to the public, and if so, how much the various external groups of people actually need to see, they will very likely give you one of two answers:
The correct answer is somewhere in the middle, but just where in the middle depends on any number of variables.
One of the problems you run
into is that while you can prepare one set of numbers to release to market analysts and
another to release to the media, there is nothing stopping one group from looking at what
you prepared for another.
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3. How much Do You Tell Them
(Continued)
Even if a report is aimed at the media, stockholders, vendors, or a market
analyst, you have to write it as if everyone will see it.
Fortunately, few people in the public are all that interested.
Another point to keep in mind, however, is that when it comes to financial
information, no matter what you prepare, you will likely be dealing with people who know
your organization, product, or financial situation better that you do. In fact, some will very
likely know more about all three of them than you do.
After all, you have to communicate with financial analysts who crunch numbers for a
living and sector of activity experts who will compare your report to every other one in your market
sector as well as with stockholders who inherited their shares. You also have to
communicate with someone who bought shares because their brother-in-law or grandchildren
told them too, and arent really sure what it is exactly that you do.
How do you cover that wide an audience? They all have different needs,
expectations, interests, backgrounds, and expertise.
You give everyone both what they need and
what they are entitled to receive, and you do so in language that they will understand.
Now lets look at how to do it.
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4. Egos and Expectations
We all have egos and expectations.
If you write as a hobby, and you are working on a short story, a novel, a script, a
poem, or any other type of writing that is not related to your work, you are entitled to
consider it your intellectual property. You are also entitled to have it say what you want
it say in the way you want to say it. It is your creative work. You own it. Your name will
be attached to it.
If you are working on a financial report for work, however, it is not your work.
It is the organizations. It must say what the organization wants to say and do so in the way
the organization wants it said. Even if your name is on it, the organization owns it and has the
final say on its form, format, style, tone, look, and content. It is the difference
between designing a race car and putting in the ignition system. One person created the
machine and the other worked on it, under the direction of the person who created and owns
it.
Expectations can also get you into trouble. If you write a novel and it is
published, you can expect to be congratulated and praised. You deserve it. Many, many
people try, but relatively few ever succeed.
If you prepare a financial report for work, you are just doing your job. If you get
a Well done! from your boss and praise from your coworkers, that is wonderful.
Its also a bonus. All we can ever truly expect from work is a paycheck and the
satisfaction of doing our jobs as well as possible.
When it comes to writing in the organizational environment, put your ego in a box, and
treat compliments as an unexpected bonus. To do otherwise, leads to resentments.
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5. Getting the Numbers DownBy
the Numbers
How you want to prepare your information will depend on how you answer the
following questions:
1) What do
you want to say?
If you are responsible for preparing a media release about a new project in which
the private sector and the government are jointly funding a research facility that will
look at developing alternative energy sources, you do not have to be an expert in finance
or alternative energy sources. You and your staff do, however, have to have access to
experts who can explain it so well that you and your staff can then turn around and
explain it to people who know less about it than you did when the project started.
2) To whom
do you want to say it?
Even though the information may be read by a wide variety of people, you nay
have a more narrow focus as your target audience. The key point to remember is that
your specific audience will help you shape your message. If you aim it at market
analysts and a journalist picks it up, it is the journalists responsibility to be
able to look at it with the same knowledge and insight that a market analyst does.
If a market analyst picks up a release sent to the media, they will ge t what the
media gets. If they want more, they will have to ask for it.
3) How are
you going to say it?
If you are writing about financial information in a media release, it still has
to follow the standard media release format. If it is contained in a letter to investors,
make sure that it looks like other letters to investors. If it is an annual report, it
better be quickly identifiable as an annual report.
6. Getting the Numbers DownBy
the Numbers (Continued)
4) How
will you organize your ideas?
Organizing can be as much of a physical process as a mental one. When it
is time to start the actual writing, make sure that you know where everything is: figures
in one file or stack papers; interpretations of those figures in another; projections in
another place; comments about the numbers, their interpretation and what they portend
someplace else. It doesnt really matter how you organize them as long as you know
where all the information is when you need it, and can get to it easily. Some people put
everything on 3-by-5 file cards others put it in neat stacks of paper, and still others
pin or tape everything to the wall, or spread it out on a large table of on the floor.
There is no one right way to do it. Whatever works for you, works for you.
5) Can you
be logical?
The reason we all learned how to outline stories and reports and term
papers in school was so we could present them in a logical way. Most professional writers
still use that process for long pieces of writing. In fact, most of them are paid in three
stages: the first third for the outline, the second third for the first draft, and the
final third when the work has been rewritten, polished, and accepted by the publisher or
studio.
The logical place to start your outline is at the beginning. What is the
first thing your audience needs to know in order to understand everything you are
going to tell them? What do they need to know next? And so on.
You can outline on paper, a computer screen, or a chalkboard. Once again,
there is no one right way to do it. Whatever works for you, works for you.
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7. Getting the Numbers DownBy
the Numbers (Continued)
6) Can you
prove it?
Journalists, investors, government regulators, bankers, financial analysts, and
anyone else who reads your report will want proof that it is true. Give your audience
enough information so that they can judge for themselves that it is true. Writing has more
impact and is more credible when you can show that something is true instead of merely
stating that it is true.
Your writing should also be specific instead of value, and every claim needs to be
backed up with facts.
7)
How many numbers do you throw at them?
Some people want to look at every number you have, and then do their own math.
Others will want to see all of them and then select some random sections to check. Some
want to see charts and other graphic representations of the numbers. Then there are those
who will focus on the bottom line, and those who just want to know what all the numbers
mean.
When it comes to a media release or an announcement, give those numbers that you
have to in order to make your point. You can explain how they were reached, but do so
without going into the math or the formulas.
If youre writing for an analyst, give them all the numbers they want. If
someone else reads it, its up to them to either figure it out, or ask for
assistance. Give the numbers, and then explain where they come from, how they were
derived, and what they mean.
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8. Getting the Numbers DownBy
the Numbers (Continued)
8) Is your
report believable?
There is more involved than numbers. Your readers will want to feel that they
are being told the truth. They want to know why something is being done, whats at
stake, and what their part in it is. They also want to know why they should care.
When you write something, you establish a relationship with the reader. The reader
gives you time, interest, attention, and, it is hoped, an open mend. Your job is to make
reading what you wrote worthwhile. To do this you must make sure it is honest, focused,
easy to understand, as interesting as possible, and show why what they are reading is
relevanthow it applies to them. If readers decide it is deceitful, filled with
self-serving half-truths, irrelevant, manipulative, pompous, or boring, they will turn
against you and your program, plan or cause.
9) Is it
simple?
Good writing is clear, focused, and easy to follow and understand.
Something as complex as a financial report, even an annual report, canand shouldbe
possible to follow without too much effort. Just remember that different readers will be
focusing on different parts of the report. Those people who focus on the numbers should
have no trouble reading yours. Those who want summaries should be able to understand them.
10. Is it too long?
Financial reports can be long documents. Everyone knows and accepts that. Dont
make them any longer than they need to be.
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9. Put Your Message Online
Every single bit of non-secret financial information you produce
for any external audiences can go on your Internet website.
Professional writers, editors, graphic artists, and designers can make your site
look as good as any professional media site, such as the online versions of
the worlds top newspapers and magazines.
The problem, however, is not just getting the information on the Internet in an
attractive and easy-to-follow format. Once again, you are competing with all the Internet
sites in the world for reader time and attention; quite often your potential audience
doesnt even know you exist. The biggest problem most organizations face is letting
people know that they are online, and just what it is they have to offer.
This is less of a problem when you are preparing specialized messages for isolated
groups; there are a limited number of market analysts that cover your sector of activity or sector.
Its fairly simple to let each of them know where you post financial information on
the Internet, and how often it is updated.
You can also let stockholders, vendors, and any other sector know where they can
find current information that is tailored for their needs. They can also look at the
information you present for other sectors as well, but the odds are that they will focus
on the material prepared for them.
After all, they are in project/programme purpose, too, and they have other things to do than spend
too much time focusing on your numbers.
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10. Details
All it takes is one little mistake in addition or subtraction to get the wrong
answer when you balance your checkbook. Starting a turn in your car either a little bit
late or a little too early can leave you with scratched fenders. Failing to get the right
information to the right people at the right time can mean delays, embarrassment, and
chaos.
The two biggest problems with details is that they are so easy to overlook, and
can cause so much trouble when they are overlooked. So lets look at some details
that go into preparing information for release. Here is a checklist:
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1. Even if a
report is aimed at the media, stockholders, vendors, or a market analyst, you have to
write it as if _______ will see it.
a.
Employees
b.
Everyone
c.
Consumers
d.
None
of the above
2.
The work on a financial report is _______ work.
a. Your
b.
The organizations
c. Your employees
d. None of the above
3.
If you prepare a financial report for work, you are doing your _______.
a.
Job
b. Homework
c. Accounting
d. None of the above
4. Even
thought the information may be read by a wide variety of people, you may have a more
narrow focus as your ________.
a. project/programme purpose
b.
Target audience
c. Message
d. All of the above
5. If writing
about financial information in a media release, it still has to follow the ________.
a.
Standard media release format
b. Guide
c. Medias image
d. None of the above
6. If you aim
your message at market analysts and a journalist picks it up, it is the _______
responsibility to be able to look at it with the same knowledge and insight that a market
analyst does.
a. Writers
b. Market analysts
c.
Journalists
d. None of the above
7. The
logical place to start your outline is at the _______.
a.
Beginning
b. Middle
c. End
d. None of the above
8. Give your
________ enough information so that they can judge for themselves that your report is
true.
a. Employees
b.
Audience
c. Stockholders
d. All of the above
9. Your
writing should also be specific instead of vague, and every claim needs to be backed up
with ______.
a. Opinions
b. Facts
c. Logic
d. All of the above
10.
When you write something, you establish a
_________ with the reader.
a. Relationship
b. Interest
c. Understanding
d. None of the above
11.
Good writing is
a. Clear
b. Focused
c. Easy to follow and understand
d. All
of the above
12.
These people can make your site look as good
as any professional media site.
a. Writers
b. Editors
c. Graphic artists
d. All
of the above
As we have
seen, there is more than accuracy involved in preparing financial information for release.
In many cased the entire package is as important as the numbers it contains.
In school, many of us lost points in math class because we didnt show our workshow
how we had reached our final answer. When it comes to financial statements, you will have
to walk a fine line. You will have to show some work, but it can be damaging
to show too much. You will also have to know exactly what information should go to what
people, and in what format. Then you must make sure that it is accurate, and ensure that
they actually get it.
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Test
1. ______ The biggest
problem most organizations face is letting people know they are online, and just what it is
they have to offer.
2. ______ Failing to get
the right information to the right people at the right time can mean delays,
embarrassment, and chaos.
3. ______ The two biggest
problems with details is that they are so easy to overlook, and can cause so much trouble
when they are overlooked.
4. ______ There is more
than accuracy involved in preparing financial information for release.
5. ______ Information is
released only to those that want the information.
6. ______ Reports are
written to only aim at the media, stockholders, vendors, and market analysts.
7. ______ If you are
working in a financial report for work, it is your work.
8. ______ Your specific
audience will help you shape your message.
9. ______ If you are
writing about financial information in a media release, it still has to follow the
standard media release format.
10. _____ Organizing can
be as much of a physical process as a mental one.
Answers:
1.
T
2.
T
3.
T
4.
T
5.
F It is released to
everyone in the public.
6.
F They are written as
if everyone sees it.
7.
F It is the organizations
work.
8.
T
9.
T
10.
T
Bibliography
Jones, F.
(1972). organization reports and accounts explained.
Lurie, A.
(1984). How to read annual reports intelligently: A
stockholders guide.
McQuail, D.
(1997). Audience analysis.
Learning Objectives
Glossary
Audience
Helps you shape
your message
Outline
Helps present writings in a logical way.
Organizing Pitting ideas
together in a systematic fashion. It is as much a physical process as a mental one as you
know where everything is located.
Good writing Is
clear, focused and easy to follow and understand.
Q&A
1. Who can see the numbers in your
financial reports?
Shareholders, partners, market analysts,
auditors, tax collectors, vendors, beneficiaries, trade associations, and the media can all be
part of the audience that reads your numbers.
2. What are some of the details that go into preparing
information for release?
Some of the information that needs to be
considered when writing a press release is what information do they want, what information
can they have, when do they need it, in what format or medium do they want it, is the
report accurate, has the information been released, is it presented in a way its intended
audience will understand, is there any information that should not be there, how much of
an explanation does the information need, who should prepare and approve it, how will you
get it to them, and how will you make sure they receive it?
3. How do you establish a relationship with the
reader?
Relationships are established when you
write something that the reader gives time, interest, attention, and an open mind towards. Your job is to make reading what you wrote
worthwhile. To do this you must make sure it
is honest, focused, easy to understand, as interesting as possible, and show why what they
are reading is relevant, and how it applies to them.